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Softly





We sat together.
her legs across me.
on a couch
in a shop
full of people
a guitar player
quiet acoustic thoughts
low rumbles
of conversation
we were consumed
with each other
everything else faded
into the background
of our moment


she makes my heart
beat faster
just breathing
her soft natural smile
the way her touch
reveals everything


we laugh
lost in us
no longer conscious
of anything
other than the universe
we have become


She leans in
connects me
flows through me
a soft quiet kiss
light
sweet
extremely intense
slow concentrated passion


she takes my hand
the drive passes quickly
in slow motion
i feel a peace
a oneness
our hands are touching
we are one
with everything

she parks
walks to the door
unlocks it
goes inside
im close behind

she turns
reaches up
with a kiss
her hands
on the back of my neck
her lips laced with
magic potions


i can feel her
inside my head
drawing me into her
she walks backwards to the bed


I asked
before I started
unbuttoning her shirt
her jeans


we moved slowly


she conducted me

her reactions


breathing


music


I said "Whatever You Like"
she put her fingertips
to my lips.
I kissed them
she pushed my head
i kissed my way down


my hands on her hips


un rapping


lights on


I kissed slowly.
from her ankle
to her knee
to her hip
teasing her impatience
there were so many more
than five senses



big bangs
in new universes
as she breathed
held my head
led me
into her sacrifice
her gift


like a prayer
in silence
we spoke words
all the gods understand



it was a slow dance
of souls with bodies


I could feel
her life
pulsating
on my tongue


Comments

  1. Diana LeeJanuary 25, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    Im sitting here trying to find words that are fine enough for this, but I can't. Such power in the sensuality of your wording and the build-up to the ending is well....orgasmic :)

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  2. moondustwriterJanuary 25, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    Quite a song
    what a dance

    thanks Theron for the One Shot

    Moonie

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    Stunning writing

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  4. Brian MillerJanuary 25, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    off to take a shower...maybe get the music out of my head...smiles. great one shot

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  5. Big Sur BlogisphereJanuary 25, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    Fuckin' "A", I'm glad I'm not young anymore. I'll stick with feedin' me birds.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    I'm with Diana, breath taking...heart breaking and leaves the soul wanting. thankyou for a tiny bubble of beauty x

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  7. ClaudiaJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    oh wow theron - this was so sensual in such a beautiful and tender way - feel tangled up in your musical words..great ending as well..and now off to take a shower...smiles

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  8. hedgewitchJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    A shared moment of life-giving love and peace. A fine love poem that goes beyond the body it fulfills and gives a drink to the spirit that is always thirsty.

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  9. dustusJanuary 26, 2011 at 1:54 PM

    Poetry that speaks of life, and love—the best connection of all. Amazing, Big Urb. This post rocks in more ways than one :)

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  10. KavitaJanuary 26, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    Wheewww... hot stuff!! So sensuous and bursting with love! Beautiful!
    "there were so many more
    than five senses" -- these lines really spoke to me! Absolutely lovely, and true!!

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 8:12 PM

    Sexy and awesome. I adored this. Great song. ♥

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  12. Steve IsaakJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    Solid effort, flow.

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